Composition Ardor
Release Of Consciousness
Held on, for quite too long
No one knows how soul prison feels like
They will say that I am not alone
Does it make any difference?
I am living in my head
My heart is chained up
My body is lost
My soul is paralyzed
I see through my eyes
But the truth feels different
I hear all the lies
Everything is a disappointment
Sleep visits at different hours
Awake but not alive
Fixing what is broken
Caught in a numbing pain
Mind in a haywire
Everything is a blur
Skin itches everywhere
Irritated and agitated
Anxious and restless
Heavy and breathless
Letting go
And finally setting this spirit free
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I hope you’ve found some peace with the release of your spirit, you consciousness. I think the hardest feeling is to feel like a prisoner within yourself. Whatever it is that’s bothering you, I hope you overcome it.
Thank you! This is a part of my healing. A healing piece. 🙂
I like the conclusion that you are finally setting this spirit free. The experience of each individual is unique, and we all have a right to it. Wonderful that you know how to put it in words so poetically.
Nina
Glad that you liked it. 🖤
This is such a beautiful poem. I really love the way you craft your poems. They’re always so powerful.
Thank you for the encouraging words! 🖤
This is a thought provoker. We do see with our eyes, but the truth does sometimes feel very different than what we see.
I can relate to this poem. There are days when I feel that the “me” doing my routine chores is the the real “me.” I am waiting for the day when I can be who I am – to spread my wings and be the person inside of me that has been patiently waiting to be free.
Glad that this has resonated with you. You have my prayers.
This is a beautiful and very deep poem. I hope it helps bring you some peace.
I am glad you were finally able to let go. IT is an opportunity for cleansing and moving forward. Very moving poem!
Thank you very much. Yes, doing cleansing right now. 🖤
Healing is really a matter of time. Letting go is first in order to move on and then the rest will follow. You go girl!
I agree. Thank you! 🖤
Very beautiful poem, I really liked it 🙂
Thank you! 🖤
I resonated to this piece. It’s so thought provoking! Thanks for posting it.
Such a lovely poem. Reminds me how I should vaulue myself as a human. Keep on writing!
very talented poem, it gave me chills. You definitely should keep on writing your poems
I loved it. Keep writing more poems please. This is so relatable.
Thank you! Will do. Working on another one now. 🖤