Composition Ardor
Celestial Soul
Watching the stars
They glimmer and shine like your eyes do
I watch from afar
Since things aren’t what they were used to
It’s another long night of longing
Of wishing that you’d fall down from the sky
And choose to land where I am waiting
Here on this bed of sands and lie
Can I just whisper on your ear
One last time to finally tell you everything
I’m not sure if you’d still like to hear
“I’ve loved you, but felt undeserving”
Was very lost and had to find myself
Wasn’t capable of committing into anything
I’ve lost what I was sure that I wanted when you left
Found myself now, just not the right timing
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Nice piece of work. I’m glad that you can reflect your feelings into the words.
Thanks a lot! 🖤
Was this a case of failed relationship? Well, it is nice that you finally realized that he is not deserving of your love. Praying that you will find the right love for you. Keep praying.
Not really a failed one. Failed to start one, maybe. It was me who was not deserving then. Thank you! We’ll see.
Hi Christy
that is beautiful! I wish i could do that…
Thank you! Do what exactly?
…express myself so beautifully and poetically as you do! It’s not coming easy to everybody, i am sure you know that… lots of love
Oh! Thanks for the compliment. It takes me a while to right pieces like these. That is true.
This is a very nice poem. I’m glad you found yourself because it is really important and I hope you find love soon.
Thank you! Let’s see. 🙂
It’s ok to lose someone. Perhaps it’s not meant to be. But don’t ever lose yourself or you lose everything.
That’s right. 🖤
I am good in story writing. I love reading poetry as I understand them but writing them isn’t my cup of tea. You have beautifully written it!
Thank you for the kind words, Moni! 🖤
Thanks for sharing this poem. It is good read, very moving and I can somehow relate. My ex lost me, because I was tired of waiting for him to get his act straightened out. Moving on after a relationship ends is not always easy, especially if you’ve given him your best and was never appreciated. I wish you well, and hope you find happiness soon.
Sadly, some of us are not ready even when the other person is. Then we lose the one we love. And finding another is close to impossible.
This is a lovely poem. Very creative, and I’m pleased to read that you feel more deserving of love now. Sometimes it’s just not mean to be
Love the poem and how you can put all your feelings and emoticons into a few lines and sum it up so beautifully!
You may have not found the right one, its good thing you found yourself. Love yourself before anything else.
I super agree.
Beautiful words when we are trying to find ourselves.
Beautiful. Love that you feel able to share such a touching piece. I think we’ve all felt undeserving of love at some point in our lives
I loved this piece! You have an incredible talent!
Thank you! 🖤
You wrote beautifully! You can consider self-publishing your poems as a book 🙂
Thank you very much! I need to write more to come up with a book. 🖤
What a gorgeous poem. I’m glad you feel more deserving of love right now. I believe that everyone deserves the chance to love and be loved 🙂
Louise x
Thank you! 🖤
This was beautiful. So sad that we can’t all be ready when we want to be for a relationship.
This piece is great! It’s actually what I’ve been going through in life right now. (as if it were written from the other). I can relate, well written!
Oh, thank you! I love it when the words resonates with a soul. 🖤
This was awesome! I’m so glad you are feeling more deserving of love because you deserve to be loved.
Great piece, I like how raw and real it sounded. It was both kinda sad but instill loved it.
Thank you! 🖤
This is so somple and yet straight to the point. I wish I could express my self like that. Nice piece of work!
Thank you! 🖤
Tastefully done. Simplicity sometimes makes a point. I love looking at the sky and looking at the stars. They are so beautiful. Gives me an appreciation for life!!!🤗
Thank you! 🖤
Nice poem. You definitely know how to make words sounds beautiful.
You really know how to put émotions into words!
Thanks 🖤
Such a lovley poem. Very soul touching.
That was beautiful thanks for sharing.
This poem is lovely, I love the simplicity.
Always good to know yourself before falling into anything or anyone else you’ll be lost if they decide to leave.
So true. 🖤
This is such a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing with us x
Every time when i read it, its getting nicer and nicer. Have you thought to make a music for it?
Oh! That is such a nice compliment! I used to write a few songs. I’m not sure if I can turn this into one. Thanks for the idea! 🖤
It’s a beautiful poem and speaks to some of the emotions so many might be going through during this pandemic. Wishing you joy in August.